About me

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Hello, I'm glad that you made it to my page. My name is Mr. Worldwide125. I am strong like an ox, fast as a cheetah, and see the future. I usually get a good breakfast, but I don't when I have to rush out the door. I won't tell you where I come from, but I play with my friends from far, far away. Some would consider my friends as Extraterrestrial life, which means they're out of this world. Did you know that the Earth is actually shaped like an ellipsoid[1]? My hobbies at my home are to play with space dirt, fly, look at rocks and play soccer. Lastly, I want to say that I love Dirt.

My Wikipedia Interest

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I like to look around on Wikipedia for my interest. On Wikipedia, I research Dirt, airplanes, moon rocks, and Lionel Messi. I hope to continue using Wikipedia and potentially start editing other posts in the future. But, of course, being a volunteer would have to require commitment and knowledge.

Article Evaluation

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A friend of mine is moving to Spokane, WA, and he asked if I could research for the best high school there. I know that North Central High School is the number one high school in Spokane, but I want to make sure I find one near his home. So I dug deeper and visited the Lewis and Clark High school article on Wikipedia and found three aspects worth commenting on: academics, student life, and school integrity.

Academics

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After extensive research, I compared the Lewis and Clark Website to other Wikipedia articles and noticed that many other schools contain an academic sub-header with sub-topics inside them with information. The sub-topics go over specifics like school technology, learning and teaching styles, research centers, etc. An academic page for schools is beneficial for students like my friend to learn about the school to which he will be entrusting his education to. Shouldn't a school have information about what they do and how they teach? I thought so as well.

Student Life

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There is no information about clubs, sports, or even programs that make a school a school. However, some Alumni show that the high school has a potentially good football team, and there is even an achievement sub-header mentioning their shoutout for their superior athletics in 2007-08 [2]. Student life's importance is enormous, and it is disappointing to see this Wikipedia article lack that.

School Integrity

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School integrity is the first or last thing a student should read about a school. It allows the student to feel welcomed uniquely. However, without explaining the school's pride and intention, a student may lose interest or even be persuaded by other sources of information that the school is terrible. The article mentions some history about the school and how it originated, but it never thoroughly explains the school's reason and intention for the students'. Choosing a school to go to is hard enough, but not including information about its integrity or even the foundation that they stand on makes the search even more challenging.

References

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  1. ^ "Is the Earth round?". February 26, 2021. {{cite web}}: |first= missing |last= (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  2. ^ CNN, Sports Illustrated (May 20, 2008). "Top 25 athletic programs for 2007-08". {{cite web}}: |last= has generic name (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)