Slow Food Article Critiques:
One section of the article that I found distracting was the piece on the past publicity efforts of Slow Food. I felt that the information was not as pertinent to the article.
Another section that I thought could be expanded upon was the objectives. I appreciated that all the objectives of the movement were stated but I felt that they could all be more in depth instead of a single sentence.
Food desert Article Edits:
- redundant footnotes are stated as a cleanup problem on the article page.
- a merge between the Food desert article and Food desert in West Oakland has been suggested.
- look for any spelling or grammar mistakes/any sentences that could be edited.
Carrying Capacity Article Critique:
This article could be expanded to cover more information. I feel as though it has a shallow exploration of carrying capacity and could have more topics covered rather than just the factors that govern carrying capacity and the ecological footprint.
Fenceline community Edit:
- Norco, Louisiana could have a link inserted to the Norco, Louisiana Wiki page.
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