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The article Nick Jr. Israel has several issues. It starts off by listing the many programs Nick Jr. (Israel) plays on the network but gives no background on what type of television network it is. It could have a leading section that includes that Nick Jr. (Israel) is a family/child friendly network that plays a series of types of television shows from educational to entertainment. Also, this article lacks valid sources that can be referenced.
Wiki Article Draft: Cosmopolitan Magazine
- My additions are in bold*
Cosmopolitan has 64 international editions worldwide including: Croatia, Greece, Romania, Estonia,UK, Norway, Australia, Spain, Sweden, Malaysia, Singapore, The Middle East Region, Latin America Region, Hungary, Finland, Netherlands, South Africa, France, Portugal, Armenia and Russia [1],and are published in 35 languages, with distribution in more than 100 countries making Cosmopolitan the largest-selling young women's magazine in the world.[3] Some international editions are published in partnerships, such as licenses or joint ventures, with established publishing houses in each local market.
Helen Gurley Brown changed the entire trajectory of the magazine during her time as editor. Cosmo was widely known as a "bland" and boring magazine by critics until 1965 when Helen Gurley Brown joined the the Cosmopolitan team as Editor-in-Chief.[2] Completely transforming the old Cosmopolitan magazine into a racy, contentious and well known, successful magazine. As the editor for 32 years, Brown spent this time using the magazine as an outlet to erase stigma around unmarried women not only having sex, but also enjoying it. [3]Known as a "devout feminist" [4], Brown was attacked by critics due to her paradoxical views on women and sex. She believed that women were allowed to enjoy sex without shame in all cases. She passed away in 2012 at the age of 90.[3] The magazine continues to honor her legacy and vision to this day. A look back on the covers perfectly express her vision and the change she contributed to Cosmopolitan Magazine. [2]
- ^ "The Hottest Cosmo Covers You've Ever Seen". Cosmopolitan.com. June 30, 2011.
- ^ a b Jaramillo, Juliana; Lowder, J. Bryan (August 14, 2012). "A Brief History of Cosmo Covers". Slate.com.
- ^ a b Fox, Margalit (August 13, 2012). "Helen Gurley Brown, Who Gave 'Single Girl' a Life in Full, Dies at 90". New York Times. Retrieved 26 October 2017.
- ^ Grinberg, Emanuella (August 19, 2012). "Helen Gurley Brown's Complicated Feminist Legacy". CNN.