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Link to IPhone X Article: IPhone X
What am I doing to this article?: As I mentioned in my critique, this article is very new and there isn't much information so I have tons of contributions that I can make.
First Contribution:
I see that there isn't much detail about the software of the new phone. Especially the new facial recognition feature in particular. Im going to go in to detail on it.
( "The facial recognition sensor consists of two parts: a “Romeo” module that projects the infrared dots to map faces, and a “Juliet” module that reads the pattern.")
Second Contribution:
The release date on the wikipedia was wrong. It said november 3, 2017, but on the apple website, it said october 27, 2017 so I changed it.
("The phone is slated for release on October 27, 2017. ")