Article Evaluation:
editMedicalization:
edit- The article seemed to jump from one topic to another. It started off with mental health, then to drug companies, to HIV/AIDS I feel that they were all over the place.
- The viewpoint seemed neutral all the topics written about was at a neutral standing point. I feel that they jumped around too many topic to go into detail.
- Many of the sources used are books
- Most of the sources used are from the earlier to mid 2000's
- On the talk page it is stated that the article needs to be updated. As well as that a Sociology expert should review the article.
- The rating are low for this article.
- We haven't gone into this topic in class yet.
Week 5: Robert Gober
edit- I would like to add were he got his ideas/inspiration.
- Also add some awards he has won-if any.
Reliable Sources:
edit- Robert Gober: The Heart Is Not a Metaphor (Book) by Hilton Als (Contributor), Robert Gober (Illustrations), Ann Temkin(Introduction), Claudia Carson (Contributor)
- http://www.theartstory.org/artist-gober-robert.htm Robert Gober-American Sculptor and Conceptual Artist Movements and Styles: Conceptual Art, Appropriation Art, Installation Art
- https://www.widewalls.ch/artist/robert-gober/ WideWalls-Robert Gober
Bubonic Plague
editThe article states that there are three types of the plague, which are bubonic plague, septicemic plague, and pneumonic plague. I would like to add in the article the differences between each type of the plague. The differences in the cause, symptoms, and treatments. I would also like to see if the other plagues have anything in common with the bubonic plague.
I would like to research and see if there has been any recent diagnosis of the plague.
Reliable Sources:
edit- Botelho, G. (2015, September 14). Bubonic plague reported in Michigan. Retrieved November 10, 2017, from http://www.cnn.com/2015/09/14/health/michigan-plague/index.html
- Plague. (2017, October 23). Retrieved November 10, 2017, from https://www.cdc.gov/plague/maps/index.html
- Plague (Black Death) Causes, Symptoms, Signs, Treatment, History and Diagnosis on MedicineNet.com. (2008, January 16). Retrieved November 10, 2017, from https://www.medicinenet.com/script/main/art.asp?articlekey=141316
- Team, T. H. (2015, November 19). The Plague. Retrieved November 10, 2017, from https://www.healthline.com/health/plague#overview1
Improvements:
edit- The article can be improved and updated.
- research the treatment and see if its the most recent type of treatment
- recent outbreaks
- maps of outbreaks in the past
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