מיכאלל

April 2021

Hello, I'm Oshwah. I noticed that in this edit to Right to privacy, you removed content without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. ~Oshwah~^{(talk) (contribs)} 17:03, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Amending sourced content

Hello. With regards to this edit, you made a significant change to the text. However, you did not change the reference to one that support the new text, meaning if an editor checks the reference used to support the new text, they will find it doesn't and may assume your edit was deliberately inserting false information. If you change sourced information, you must also change the source. Please could you do that here. Thanks, Number 57 19:45, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

there was no source for the statement that Magen was occupied - it was not. In the short explanation for the edit i cited the Sunday Times story from today (Oct. 15, 2023) which describes the battle that took place there. Can you please assist with adding a footnote - i am no good at that, i am afraid.

thanks! מיכאלל (talk) 19:48, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

There was a source – the Guardian one, which stated "Israels’s channel 13 is reporting that 7 communities are under Hamas control. These include Sderot, Nahal Oz, Kfar Aza, Magen, Sufa Beheri and general command of Gaza." Number 57 20:03, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

It was wrong, perhaps the dramatic events etc. misled them. I moved the original FN a bit up, and managed to add the Times very detailed story from today about the events in Magen, clearly indicating that the place was attacked - but not occupied, unlike Nir Oz and many other communities in the region. מיכאלל (talk) 20:06, 15 October 2023 (UTC)