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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sebastien Sirois (December 27)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No idea as to Notability, although I have my doubts, but the promotional tone of the content is a long way from encyclopedic. Some, completely unsourced, examples - "Neon Buddha’s ethical work standards, and continuing education programs are fundamental values to Sebastien"; "With offices in New York, Montreal, Toronto, Vancouver, Hong Kong, China and Thailand, he is always on the go"; "Sharing their dad's passion for adventure". Wikipedia doesn't do Puffery. That you've declared a CoI doesn't give licence to then write a completely promotional article.

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KJP1 (talk) 08:48, 27 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

Draft:Sebastien Sirois

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I've replied on my Talkpage. KJP1 (talk) 23:11, 27 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

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