From what I gathered, your two objects were paintings, one of Cleopatra and one abstract painting by Georgia O’Keeffe. Firstly, I think both paintings were described really well, there was enough formal analysis to give the reader a good sense of what is being depicted in the paintings. I would advise adding a heading to give a better understanding of what the theme is or rather what ties the two paintings together. For technical terms that might need more context such as chiaroscuro, you can highlight them so that the reader can click on it and it will send them to a different wiki page that goes into further detail about it. I've added a link that might be helpful it gives you a cheat sheet on how to edit your page basically how to add highlighted words, images, etc. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Cheatsheet There are only a few grammatical errors that need revision and both paragraphs are a bit on the shorter side it might help to add a bit more information. Perhaps something about where the paintings are displayed or how audiences reacted to them. EAElizalde (talk) 23:25, 23 May 2019 (UTC)