2025Newbie

First article. Advice and criticism sought

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:2025Newbie/sandbox&redirect=no

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Amikam_Toren

I’m an aspiring Wikipedia content creator and complete beginner. This is my first article and I welcome all criticism and advice on how I can improve. I still have some citations to source for this – these are marked by * in the text.

What am I getting wrong about the ISBN’s cited here?

My interests are Contemporary Art, Physics, Philosophy and Literature. 2025Newbie (talk) 19:14, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Amikam Toren has been accepted

Amikam Toren, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 08:11, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

Thank you SO much, Safari Scribe, for reviewing my first article. I really appreciate you taking the time to do this. Also thank you for cleaning up - and improving - some of the text, and the technical edits you did. It's so great that experienced user's, like yourself, are helping beginners, like me. All the very best x 2025Newbie (talk) 11:44, 10 November 2024 (UTC)