User talk:8isfate/3racha Sandbox subpage

Review

Excellent start! I made a few edits (see your page's history). When you've addressed my suggestions, please proceed according to the directions in the syllabus.

• moving citations after terminating periods
• finish references and fix those showing red text
• explain what is meant by "training"
• move to mainspace
• once it's live, make sure it's not a Wikipedia:Orphan
• and add categories then too
• maybe a photo (?)

-Reagle (talk) 18:08, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the edits; I did some tweaks. I'm not sure what is going on with citations 53--56? -Reagle (talk) 12:08, 23 October 2020 (UTC)