911skittles
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:32, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
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editThis is to mention several changes that will be done to Sam Pancake's article:
1) I will add the "Overview" section which will discuss his age, place of growth and his net-worth are important details that were ignored earlier.
They will be added using credible sources.
I will also include a recent picture of him so that readers can identify him as well.
2) I will divide "Career section" into two parts which are "Education "and "Career" as both of them occurred in two different phases.
3) Personal life: I will add this section so that the audience can get more idea about him as the only thing that was mentioned previously is that he is gay. The names of his family members, his marital status, number of children and his previous relationship(s) will be added.
4) I will add to the "Career" section some information discussing his popularity ranking.
5) I will add some information to present the awards he got in the "His Accomplishments".
- @911skittles: Hi Maram, Dr. Sarraf here. These are great ideas.
- Please coordinate with Fawaz, as he also suggested adding a picture of Sam Pancake to the article.
- What content will you place under "Education"?
- What sources will you use to substantiate your additions to the personal life section, career section, and awards section? KjessJKT (talk) 15:54, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
- @911skittles: Hello Maram, I have enjoyed reading your edits I think that they are valuable to improve Sam Pancake's page. Regarding his personal life, what sources were you able to find? I tried briefly looking through the web using the Google search engine and the information has been limited.
- Quick note: In your first point, you mentioned that his net worth is an important detail. I personally think that the net worth of the person should not be a priority given the state of the article is in right now. Don't ignore this bit of information just yet, but it is not a priority in my opinion
- Other than that point, I felt that all of your proposed edits were appropriate to the subject matter. We'll discuss in today's class about the inclusion of a photo. Great Job! FWZ BHR (talk) 16:41, 25 February 2021 (UTC)