ABBslp

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Hello, ABBslp, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:51, 14 September 2017 (UTC)

Hi!

Hello ABBslp. Let's talk. Jogruber (talk) 15:10, 15 September 2017 (UTC)

A pie for you!

Merveilleux travail Alex BM (talk) 05:11, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Talk page question

Hi! Ian (Wiki Ed) is the content expert for your course so he's the best person to look at your draft, as he'll be more familiar with the sourcing requirements and all. Cheers! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:01, 13 November 2017 (UTC)

Nice work.

• References go after punctuation, not before. I fixed that in that's there currently.
• The first two sentences in the first paragraph lack sources.
• You started a sentence with "therefore", which is a bit of a red flag. When you say "therefore", you're usually drawing a conclusion. You shouldn't be drawing conclusions, you should be reporting on what reliable sources have to say about the topic.
• Your references are incomplete (they lack years) which is odd if you're using the cite tool on the visual editor. They need years. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:56, 15 November 2017 (UTC)