A Bhagwandin

It's not bad, so far I am getting the hang of it. Joan Bailey (talk) 02:04, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Hey, How is it going for you? I feel like I may never get the hang of this -_- --Jjdee (talk) 05:39, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

Hi alysia, thanks for doing the peer review, but you did not put the feedback under my name in the feedback box could you do so for mr please thank you--Keronica Grant (talk) 18:37, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

Hi alyssa, could you please add my feedback under my in the feedback section on blackboard i need to send in the feed back before wednesday. thank you--Keronica Grant (talk) 05:19, 24 February 2013 (UTC)

Removal of Alcoholism in workplace section

Howdy! I just removed a large addition by you on alcoholism and the workplace. Unfortunatly there were no citations and thus I could only assume that it was original research, which we can't put into wikipedia. Now that being said I would be glad to help you out on the formatting and you can then place it into the Alcoholism page without any worries that it will be removed. A good rule of thumb is one to two citations for each sentence. Wikipedia is really strict on what it considers a reliable source so look over that link to make sure you are using the right types of sources. I would also look over WP:SYNTH just to make sure you aren't synthesizing two or more WP:RS. Please let me know how I can help. Cheers! Coffeepusher (talk) 02:49, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

Your recent edits

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Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 22:39, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

A couple of things

1. There needs to be inline refs
2. Refs need to comply with WP:MEDRS (last 5 to 10 years and secondary sources)
3. Some of your addition make no sense " Over 14 billion suffer from this deadly problem everyday" Please note that their or only 7 billion people on planet earth.

Please discuss changes on the talk page. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:09, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

Alcoholism page

Hey I was wondering if i edited the alcoholism page right or was it wrong again?A Bhagwandin (talk) 23:00, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

I've taken a look at the comments left on your page and I agree that those are some concerns. Lets take a look at what we need to do. First off, we need to find some Reliable sources for your addition, then we need to format them into inline citations. I can do that for you well if you would like, but I do need some sources. Why don't you get back to me when you have those sources ready and we can work on this together. I'm going to post this on your page as well, but most people keep a conversation on a single page so usually I would expect you to monitor my talk page. Also, in the future, please place your comments at the bottom of a person's talk page. I know you didn't know that. Cheers! Coffeepusher (talk) 04:35, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Edit warring

Next time you add this poor quality, wrong stuff to the article I will need to block you from editing. If you do not know what you are doing practice in your sandbox. Best. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:09, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Request

Sure thing! I'll check it out. Joselv83 (talk) 03:09, 17 May 2013 (UTC)