Latest comment: 11 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Hello, Abbie.dodz! Welcome to Wikipedia! I've seen you at the Female sexual arousal disorder, Hypoactive sexual desire disorder and Anorgasmia articles, and have tweaked some of your edits. I've also seen that you are planning on creating a Sexual Interest/Arousal Disorder article, as seen here, here, here, and at your sandbox: User:Abbie.dodz/sandbox. However, like I noted with this edit, since it is only a proposed addition to the DSM-5 and largely overlaps with existing articles, I'm not sure that there should be a Wikipedia article on it; I'll ask elsewhere about that. In the meantime, don't feel discouraged from creating it; whether or not it should be a standalone article can always be assessed later. I'm also not sure if you are working in these areas as a project assigned by a teacher or just to improve these articles, and create a new article about it, on your own accord, but I welcome you all the same and offer the following advice: See WP:Manual of Style. Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Capital letters, you need to make sure that headings are not inappropriately capitalized. Also, per Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Section headings, "Headings should not refer redundantly to the subject of the article, or to higher-level headings, unless doing so is shorter or clearer. (Early life is preferable to His early life when his refers to the subject of the article; headings can be assumed to be about the subject unless otherwise indicated.)" Also use WP:REFPUNCT (punctuation before, not after, references) and avoid WP:WHITE SPACES (one or more extra white gaps between a section). In addition to the guideline links above, I believe that you will benefit from clicking on some or all of the tutorial, guideline and policy links below, which will help you familiarize yourself with aspects of Wikipedia that you are unfamiliar with or need to better familiarize yourself with. If you have any questions, you can ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or by typing four tildes "~~~~"; this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you are already excited about Wikipedia, you might want to consider being "adopted" by a more experienced editor or joining a WikiProject to collaborate with others in creating and improving articles of your interest. Click here for a directory of all the WikiProjects. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field when making edits to pages. Happy editing! Flyer22 (talk) 05:34, 31 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
Latest comment: 11 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Hello again, Abbie.dodz. Above, I stated that I'd ask about the Sexual Interest/Arousal Disorder article you plan to create. I have done so here, at the talk page of psychologist/sexologist James Cantor. As noted there, you are free to weigh in on his talk page about it. Flyer22 (talk) 18:45, 4 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
