User talk:Abuckley3/Hyperlite Wake Mfg.

Pre-move Review

Hello Abuckley3, I noticed that you had not copied over the original article, so I created a clone before looking over your change history. I see that you've made some significant changes from the original article. However, there is definitely some work that needs to be done before "going live".

• Copy over the infobox and categories that were on the original article.
• Find more citations to add as references, currently there are none.
• Do some copy-editing, for instance, the "History" section has "[edit]" in it.

Here are a few additional suggestions that will really make your additions shine:

• Find other articles about a related subject, see which sections that may be applicable to yours, add those sections and fill them with content. Perhaps starting looking at Category:Water sports equipment manufacturers.
• Use the short description template for your paragraph above the Table of Contents.
• Find and add some relevant images.
• Add some internal links, for instance "Redmond, WA".
• Add a "See also" section of related articles and a "External links" section, probably of the official website and if there is something else relevant.
• Try to link to any relevant WikiProjects.
• Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.

Please ping me on Wikipedia once you're ready and I'll check back. Thanks!  一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 09:50, 12 February 2020 (UTC)