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editI'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.
I see that you've made some additions to a copy of the Maria Rebecca Davison, including the changes in the sections, editing and addition of a Description section. What do you think about moving description to some point after early life, so that it flows a bit better chronologically?
Are you intending to add any additional content about Davison? If so, there's a bit more info here, here, and image and a bit of info here,
If you're interested, there are additional images at here of performances, here, and The National Portrait Gallery in London, which could be uploaded to [1] with the {{PD-UK}} licensing tag. If you need help with this, I'd be happy to help. You can also "ping" me (just type "{{ping|CaroleHenson}}" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!--CaroleHenson (talk) 18:38, 10 November 2014 (UTC)