Adeline.lajoinie

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ali Zolghadri (June 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:23, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello, Adeline.lajoinie! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:23, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Ali Zolghadri. Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:26, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

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Happy editing! DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:26, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, Adeline.lajoinie. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Ali Zolghadri, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

• avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization or competitors;
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:26, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ali Zolghadri (June 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:53, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello,

How can I " declare your COI / paid editing", please ? Actually, I did not write this page but I advise the team of students and scientists who wrote these texts, that they wanted the most neutral and encyclopedic possible on a professor who is very important for them in the scientific world. So I was not paid (and no one was) to write this page. I just give advice to put it on wikipedia (and again, many new rules were foreign to me). So don't worry about explaining that somewhere but for me it's not a conflict of interest at all. Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 11:45, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

There are two separate but related issues here that you need to address:

1. COI: Do you have a conflict of interest with regards to the article subject, for example do you know them personally or professionally? COI is quite a broad concept, and covers all sorts of scenarios, so before saying you have no COI "at all", please take a moment to consider this carefully.
2. Paid editing: Are you being, or do you expect to be, paid or otherwise rewarded for writing this article? This doesn't just mean being paid in a direct and express way (eg. "write this, and we will give you $100"), but could mean you being employed by the organisation that also employs the person in question, or you working as a freelance writer for a PR agency that is hired to do this person's publicity.

If either or both of these apply to you, you must declare them as per the instructions provided above in the 'Managing a conflict of interest' section. If they do not apply, then please state that in writing, by replying to this message.

Thank you, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:20, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello,

For COI and paid editing, i'm not concerned. I'm paid to help people to understand wikipedia (it's more complicated that i thought, in order they publish this article. But I have'nt write it. Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 16:46, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

It's just that unless I'm mistaken, on the French Wikipedia you said you are being compensated. Please do correct me if I got that wrong, French is not my strong suit. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:54, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Yes of course, i'm full transparent on my fench profile : https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Utilisateur:Adeline.lajoinie

I've been compensated to help people to understand how wikipedia is working, not to write or edit a text. Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 16:59, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

I have to say you're being quite evasive, and what you wrote on fr.wiki seems ambiguous to me, so I can only conclude that you may well contravene either the COI or UPE rules. Therefore my advice to you is to disclose, even if you don't feel you need to; it's better than not disclosing, when it later turns out that you did need to. Of course, up to you how you choose to action this (or not).

One thing I do want to ask specifically, because I'm not sure you've conclusively answered it yet: do you know Ali Zolghadri in any sense of the word, eg. have you spoken with him or met him, is he a colleague or client, etc.? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:10, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

hello,

i don't know Ali Zolghadri personaly, no, he's not my client nore my colleague. I'm just helping the DERA (a science university group in France) to publish this page on wikipedia.

But no problem to "disclose" : how can I do that, please ? Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 08:01, 15 June 2022 (UTC)

Is that ok for you this disclosure ? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adeline.lajoinie Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 11:16, 15 June 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ali Zolghadri (June 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Padavalamkuttanpilla was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
• If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Padavalam🌂  ►  11:47, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ali Zolghadri (September 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Greenman (talk) 11:09, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ali Zolghadri (January 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChunky was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ali Zolghadri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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❯❯❯ Chunky aka Al Kashmiri (✍️) 18:05, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Ali Zolghadri

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:01, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Ali Zolghadri

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 18:17, 4 July 2023 (UTC)