Dattaramji Parwatkar editing

edit

Greetings, please be advised that your article, Dattaramji Parwatkar needs substantial editing to meet Wikipedia standards. Primarily, it is written in an extremely subjective manner. Please look at some older and established articles on Indian musicians, note the style of writing used, and apply it to your article. If your article is not corrected, an administrator may delete it as unduly biased towards the subject. If you click on the list of objections attached to the top of the article, you can get information on correcting. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:38, 6 January 2009 (UTC)Reply