User talk:Aflores6/sandbox

peer review commentary

Great work! Lots of important info and there's a lot more information offered in the article now.

Comments on Wiki Draft

1. The intro part you cut was informative, and you don't want to start the section with "however..."
2. fix commas in first paragraph
3. clarify - "classic salsa - salsa monga or "limp salsa". this makes it sound like classic salsa is limp salsa
4. This appears in paragraph 1 and 4: "However, Marc Anthony surpasses his colleagues not only in fame, but in sales as well, being the highest selling salsa artist of the past two decades.[1] By blending elements of pop into his songs - a s well as making pop versions of his salsa songs - Anthony has been able to establish a loyal fan base of Hispanics of all nationalities, as well as broaden his audience to non-Spanish speaking individuals."
5. word choice - "hand held into the business"
6. fix formatting of citation
Melaniehuska (talk) 23:40, 16 April 2017 (UTC)