Afuakessie
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:19, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
Hello Afuakessie! It seems either I can't find you article contribution or you didn't post it on here. This makes me unable to edit and review your contribution! The only advice I can give you now is to post your rough draft either in your sandbox or on the talk page of your topic so I can review it and helpers on here can too! Best of luck and don't forget your sources. Adrianaa2016 (talk) 00:49, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
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WIKI PEER REVIEW:
Hello @Afuakessie, Good start but your article definitely needs some work! A few things I noticed is there are weird sentences that don't flow, grammar errors, and you need more sources! You also posted (link 1,2, 3) but didn't post the links below, make sure to post those with the article so people can check if they are credible or not. Make sure after every sentence or few sentences you cite the source you used, don't go too long without having a source present. Better to have more then less! This article contribution also doesn't read like a normal wiki piece and needs to read and sound neutral. Write more like you're stating facts and not an opinion! Best of luck! :) Adrianaa2016 (talk) 15:05, 8 December 2016 (UTC)