Ajrchristy97

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:47, 23 September 2019 (UTC)

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Hi! So far your sandbox looks fine, however there aren't a huge amount of changes. I'll be honest in that I'm not sure what more can be added to the page as far as large additions go. Also, keep in mind that abbreviations in articles are fine as long as there is something earlier in the article that explains the abbreviations. (Ie, something like "Gender dysphoria (GD)")

It may be better to choose a topic that allows for more expansion, unless you see something in the page that is missing. To be honest, I noticed that there is no article for the book itself - would that be something that you would be interested in? There are some reviews out there for the book ([1], [2], [3]). I also think that the Crocker Mountain (Maine) was mentioned in the book, so that could be a topic area. So could Robert Bartlett (explorer).

If not that, then it looks like the article on The Invisible Gorilla (the video) is in dire need of expansion as well and it seems like no one has taken it yet. The bonus part of taking a book article is that this is one of my areas of expertise and I can absolutely help you with things like layout and so on. Also, definitely feel free to email me at shalorwikiedu.org with more questions. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 14 October 2019 (UTC)