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Your submission at Articles for creation: Callum Hiddleston (July 12)

Latest comment: 1 month ago4 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Johannes Maximilian were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please note that Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view. Phrases such as "progress[ing] right the way through", "he would play a pivotal role", "His impressive performances" or "owing to strength" transport an extremely positive point of view an must always be attributable to high-quality reliable, secondary sources. Now, looking at the references, I would argue that this draft is largely based on Sheffield United F.C. press releases, however, most of the positive criticism is not depicted in that (i.e. Shefflied United F.C.) source which makes me believe that it is made up. Best, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 12:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 12:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Ajw.89! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 12:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi Johannes. I have re-edited the article titled 'Callum Hiddleston'. I can assure you nothing is made up. It's hard to get references on certain things (for example when a player joined a club at eight years old) as most football clubs choose not to publicise that information. But it is correct. And some of the sources are YouTube links where you'll be able to hear the positive comments for yourself from those involved in football who said the words (example: the Ossett Town manager commenting that Callum would play in the Football League one day).

Please can you re-look at the article and approve it for submission please.

Thank You.

Andrew Ajw.89 (talk) 13:04, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Callum Hiddleston (August 2)

Latest comment: 18 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Callum Hiddleston and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 13:46, 2 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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