Your submission at Articles for creation: Luzia Simons (September 13)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Lopifalko was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Lopifalko (talk) 11:19, 13 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
 
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September 2021

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Hello AldonsoP. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:AldonsoP. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=AldonsoP|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. --- Possibly 14:28, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hello Possibly. Thanks for your comments. I am new to this. Indeed I have to declare COI, already edited my user page. I am not doing this for pay, but as a curator and personal friend of the artist. Nevertheless I believe she has a relevant enough career to get a wiki entry. --AldonsoP (talk) 19:54, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@AldonsoP: thank you for clarifying that. Yes, I think she qualifies for an article in terms of notability. You will need to make sure everything is sourced. Also, be aware that statements like "Identity as a sociocultural construction" probably aren't a good idea, as this is a general encyclopedia, and it also looks like original research. Make it simple, and all sourced, and it will be fine. --- Possibly 20:02, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
I made a few edits to the article. It is close to be ready to pass AFC, but it needs two things: the date of birth and education should have a source right next tot he claim. Second, the section that theorizes her work ("Identity as a sociocultural construction has been central... displaced and transformed from its natural origin.") needs to be given in non-artspeak. If you can say the same thing very simply, in less academic language, I think your article will be ready to publish. --- Possibly 20:13, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Possibly thank you again for the precious tips. I will look into that. Does it mean that despite the COI I can keep on editing? --AldonsoP (talk) 21:44, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@AldonsoP: yes of course, keep editing the draft. You can edit drafts all you like as long as you disclose your COI. When you are ready, submit it for AFC review. If it is published, do not edit the article (in "article space", visible to the public) directly; instead, ask on the talk page for changes. That is the nutshell WP:COI guideline. We are appreciative of those who approach WP honestly. Thanks. --- Possibly 22:57, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Luzia Simons (November 6)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ThadeusOfNazereth was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
ThadeusOfNazerethTalk to Me! 09:18, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Luzia Simons

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  Hello, AldonsoP. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Luzia Simons, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:01, 8 April 2022 (UTC)Reply