Alexandra08w

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 11:48, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Graham Fisher

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 16:01, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

Toynbee Hall article

Hello. I should explain something about my edits to Toynbee Hall, which is that the first two edits on Friday 28 March were made at a Wikimedia UK workshop for the Royal Society of Chemistry. They were mine, but through another trainer's account. I then tidied up the article when I got home.

What we were doing was to illustrate the problems of articles about institutions, in relation to Wikipedia's guideline on "conflict of interest". Please review the page at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest.

I had some points to make on the day about choice of language. I also explained that there was a case to be made that Toynbee Hall (building) and Toynbee Hall (charity) should be separate articles. As far as I could see the charity started in 1898 with the legal advice centre, and there was certainly plenty of interesting history of the building before then (e.g. Marconi).

I noted one point about language on Talk:Toynbee Hall, since you reverted some of my changes. Generally, encyclopedic writing has to stick close to verifiable facts, and to adopt an appropriate tone.

I'd like to think the article(s) could be improved somewhat from where it is now. Please consider using Talk:Toynbee Hall before going ahead further, since that is the standard forum. Charles Matthews (talk) 10:39, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

I've moved your contribution down to User talk:Charles Matthews#Toynbee Hall. Charles Matthews (talk) 11:13, 2 April 2014 (UTC)