Alexverca

		The Rosetta Barnstar
		Well done for delivering by deadline MHAN2016 (talk) 20:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

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Hello Alexverca, in your translation I noticed some things that might be improved:

• pointy nose who is wearing green hat - pointy nose wearing a green hat
• sweet must in which you add Humulus lupulus - to which + use a passive construction
• It taste better - It tastes better
• has been brewed from September 2000 by the micro-brewery Brasse - has been brewed since September 2000 by the micro-brewery Brasse

Loyen.martin (talk) 08:36, 21 March 2016 (UTC)