User talk:Amsvjoe/sandbox

Hi Amsvjoe,

I did feedback for you page, your page is good though I could not find the citation for the article in citation need? As for the citation for new information, do you know much about the other? He is qualified to speak about the topic? I believe the research guide on the mount library would really help with a good strong citation- either social economy or politics would be great guides. The new information looks good, I believe there are just minor fixes to be done to the paragraph for better flow! I hope this helps! Ampo00182 (talk) 17:00, 8 August 2015 (UTC)