Anaconda451

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van Bloss

I left you a structure in place, but you need to add page numbers from the book on each of those citations. Welcome !! SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:42, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

On this part:

• The book is devoid of self-pity and shows that van Bloss has embraced his Tourette's and lives along-side it.

because it expresses opinion, it needs attribution. In other words, it needs some wording like, "According to so-and-so, who wrote the forward to his book, the book is devoid of self pity ... " In other words, it sounds like marketing, so we need to know who said it. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:31, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

It's looking good; another issue. When I looked it up in the ISBN finder (see the userbox on my userpage) so I could add the ISBN, it says the book was published by Vision press, but your text says Fusion press. Is it really Fusion? If so, your page numbers might not agree with the book and ISBN I listed in refs, which is from Vision. Can you sync those? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:42, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

By the way, I have your talk page watched; you can respond here and I'll see it. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:44, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

Only just saw that - re-posting here what I wrote on your talk page, just in case.... Many thanks again - I checked the book details - only one edition available as of now and it's Fusion Press - apparently a division of Vision.

Can you doublecheck that the ISBN number agrees with the one I listed? If not, it still needs to be sorted. No hurry :-) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 04:01, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

Just checked - the ISBN is the same - definitely Fusion Press. :)

Great, I'll sync it in the article, since your text disagrees with my ref. By the way, you can sign your posts by adding four tildes ( ~~~~ ) after your posts. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 04:05, 29 March 2008 (UTC)