"History section addition project feedback"

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Hello, I am doing a research project for my college history class on Bellville, Ohio and its founding historians. Included in that research are The Oldfields and the story of the tornado coming through the town to help clear the path for the settlers. My timeline on this project is a couple of weeks but I need to turn something into my professor September 29th at 11 p.m. as some of the preliminary material. I would like some constructive feedback from my wikipedia community.