Anewton9
Evaluation for King's 2012
edit- 1/1 The Student has improved the quality of the information available in this article
- 1/1 The student has improved the clarity and/or organization of the content
- 1/1 The student has clearly explained the method and findings of an empirical paper
- 1/1 The student has correctly cited the empirical paper according to Wikipedia guidelines and the paper is appropriate
- 4/4 total
- This article has certainly been improved. The few areas that were available to edit were edited well, the explanation of the study on Mother's Behavior Toward Attractive and Unattractive Infants was done well (good job on addressing the conflicts too), and the citations seem to be done correctly and in place where they are needed. I do not know enough about this subject to suggest any more improvements you could make, but if any more are done that are in this manner, they should be fine. Overall, I learned about the Kewpie doll effect while reading this article with your revisions, so I think Wikipedia has benefited from them. Good job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rwaring58 (talk • contribs) 03:05, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
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