User talk:Ashleyglim/Hello Kitty murder

Peer Review

Hi! This is Isabella from COM 481. I published a peer review for your article and just wanted to give you a heads up so you are able to find it. Thanks, --Bellamila13 (talk) 23:58, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I just peer reviewed your article! Here's the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashleyglim/Hello_Kitty_murder/Rockinslick_Peer_Review Rockinslick (talk) 06:46, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

You have done some very impressive work here -- just keep going in this direction. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 08:12, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

in-progress update

Hi @Ashleyglim:

This is shaping up nicely; I think the only items left to do are to update the lead to summarize the new content you added (perhaps a sentence or two). Also, it looks like one of the references broke in the copying and pasting (it just says [4] instead of being a clickable footnote).

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:10, 7 February 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Hi @Ashleyglim:

This article is approved to go live.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 23:50, 10 February 2022 (UTC)