User talk:Aslider/sandbox

I think that over all it is a good draft. I do think there should be a few more citations just to make it seem more credible. Maybe adding a little more information to social psychology might help to better understand virginity as it is talked about in psychology. Also maybe put the definitions of virginity loss in the initial definition in the part below that you have labeled "Definitions of Virginity Loss". I think that the tone is very neutral and it is easy to understand everything that you are speaking about. Great job! Tessakirk (talk) 18:46, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review

Overall, this was a solid draft. I was still unsure to what was edited and what wasn't edited. But your draft had good points and had a lot of information on virginity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewlee155 (talk • contribs) 21:15, 28 February 2017 (UTC)