Ways to improve Digital redlining

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Hello, Autumm393,

Thanks for creating Digital redlining! I edit here too, under the username Citrivescence and it's nice to meet you :-)

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This article could use some more sourcing on the origins and development of this term. In addition, it reads like an essay. See MOS:OPED for details. Thank you!

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Citrivescence (talk) 05:16, 3 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Citrivescence: Thanks for your review Citrivescence I am new to editing and still getting used to the voice that is needed. I'm reaching out for some help with this as well as doing some research around the origins of the term. Thanks again for your feedback. Autumm393 (talk) 07:12, 6 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Autumm393: Absolutely. A good place to start would be WP:YFA because it offers tips on how to avoid editorializing in articles. You can also go to WP:Q for a list of spots with editors who can give you feedback. In terms of finding the origins of digital redlining, I would go to the citations you have on the article and read them to see who coined the term, or do some searching on Google Scholar. In general, keep in mind that every single statement in your article should be sourced; statements like "however" "although" and "conversely" tend to denote original research, which is not allowed. Another strategy is to find another article on a similar topic and use it as a model. I hope that helps! Citrivescence (talk) 14:02, 6 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

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