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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hiroko Takayama (July 9)

Latest comment: 4 months ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see the referencing tutorial at WP:INTREFVE.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Qcne (talk) 20:14, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Avi Gazit! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 20:14, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hiroko Takayama (July 26)

Latest comment: 3 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Spiderone was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See WP:INTREFVE

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hiroko Takayama and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Spiderone^{(Talk to Spider)} 09:33, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hiroko Takayama (August 30)

Latest comment: 2 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There's not much here. (Saying that somebody was a panelist at such-and-such a symposium is desperate.)

There is, however, the promise of more, within In 2022, she exhibited her work in "Upendra Maharathi and Hiroko Takayama: Weaving Ties between Japan and India through Painting," held at the Hiroshima Prefectural Art Museum. Having a solo (or half-of-a-duo) exhibition in one of the prefectural galleries is quite an achievement. But this straightforward claim comes with no reference. Also, I'd expect that such an exhibition would be described (and perhaps reviewed) in Chūgoku shinbun and the like: where are the summaries of these descriptions?

Incidentally, while English translations of the Japanese (or Hindi or whatever) titles of sources are welcome as additions, the draft should supply the actual (original) titles: 「描いたインド愛　モディ首相に　広島の洋画家、菩薩の絵を贈る」, etc. --

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hiroko Takayama and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Hoary (talk) 02:52, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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