User talk:Barbarapaulino/sandbox

Peer Review

I had no idea the term Mysogynoir existed! This is fascinating! I think you are on the right track. Your sources seem relevant and your writing is balanced. Where do you plan on putting this in the overall structure of the article? Do you also plan on editing more of the main page? Seeing as how you are a party of one, I understand if that is too daunting; however, I think you could offer quite a lot to the current state of the main article. I am excited to see your end product. ALeigh602 (talk) 04:47, 2 November 2016 (UTC)

It interesting to know that the term Mysogynoir was created by a black feminist. It is no surprise that that black men are targeted by their race and women are targeted by both their gender and sex. It was also interesting to know that women are more active in the electoral process than men are which is surprising because although there was still racism one would think that men would be more involved in politics than women because they still had a voice due to their masculinity. Having said this I looked your wiki page and I felt that this would fit nicely above after black power because you talk about how women specifically black were a part of politics but weren't represented enough. I also think it would be a nice transition to Political Representation. J.platero (talk) 20:20, 2 November 2016 (UTC)