User talk:Benjamin.pioske/sandbox

Does our group want to meet up, so we can discuss the outline?

Feedback

@Benjamin.pioske: Nice work on your draft. I have a few minor things I would recommend changing

• Wikipedia does format date like "December 2nd, 1873". Use "December 2, 1873".
• I would add mention of his subfield (psychology of religion) to the lead, and move the quote out of the lead, into the "career" section.
• The URL for the Pizarosso reference is wrong. file:///C:/Users/Ben Pioske/Downloads/DelacroixPizarosso.pdf is a file on your computer. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:21, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

I took care of everything is it fine to move over?

Benjamin.pioske (talk) 01:11, 9 December 2016 (UTC)