BizzyMac

hey bizzymac lets party. in the spirit of course

BizzyMac, it looks like you have some solid pages to consider. I'll send detailed feedback shortly. Ajungle (talk) 18:51, 14 February 2013 (UTC)

I approve your topic of International Business. Go for it. Ajungle (talk) 19:16, 14 February 2013 (UTC)

Some changes I believe that will improve the article are in the areas of operation objectives, means, physical and societal factors, and also competitive factors. I have look at other articles and also am majoring in this field of study so I know that there is more to these parts in international business then the article states. BizzyMac (talk) 06:27, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

I’ve made the following changes to the International Business article. Added “Diversify their revenue stream” under operations and objectives and also added a new “Risk” column to the page “Strategic risk, operational risk, political risk, country risk, technological risk, environmental risk, economic risk, financial risk, terrorism risk.”

I have helped Dprice12 and told him he could make these changes, improve this article by changing the title to a more accurate title that is not as confusing. Also you could make your information a little more clear by changing up some words here and there other then that it looks good. This is the first time that I have read about something like this so it was interesting, and with these changes I believe that this will be a great article for others to read.

I have helped Kabrown12 and told him he could make these changes, I believe that you should add more to what International Residential Real Estate is and also add why people involve themselves in such acts. It is always nice to tell people why people do things either for money, or just to have a nice vacation spot for themselves and to rent out.

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Hey BizzyMac! Great edits to your article on International business. The only suggestion that I have is that you could define the types of risks that you listed. Other than that, great article, great job! Heatherc43 (talk) 17:42, 27 April 2013 (UTC)