Bluejazz6
Hello, lady. Welcome to wikipedia. Purplesky91 (talk) 10:44, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Welcome to Wikipedia. I see that you've already chosen a topic. Could you please give a link to your topic page on the following page-http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:India_Education_Program/Courses/Fall_2011/Research_Methodology_Year_3_Group_A#Students, so that it would be easier to access for the teachers and other users?--Jinchurikidan (talk) 18:55, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
hi Bluejazz6, please write your topic on the course page as soon as you can, the last date for submitting the article is october 14th, so hurry up!!! you have already crossed many deadlines.
Devanshi tripathi (talk) 19:03, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
September 2011
editWelcome to Wikipedia. A page you recently created, Williamson's Model of Managerial Discretion, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines for new pages, so it will be removed shortly (if it hasn't been already). Please use the sandbox for any tests, and consider using the Article Wizard. For more information about creating articles, you may want to read Your first article. You may also want to read our introduction page to learn more about contributing. Thank you. --Orange Mike | Talk 15:53, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
- I certainly don't want to discourage you from creating new articles here; but an actual article needs actual substantive content, rather than just "Patel's Model of X is a model by Patel"! --Orange Mike | Talk 15:57, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
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editHello, I am an experienced Wikipedia editor who has volunteered as an online ambassador to assist students editing Wikipedia:India Education Program/Courses/Fall 2011/Research Methodology Year 3 Group A articles. Please call on me freely with respect to editing and style questions. I can also address any issues you may encounter with other users confidentially. I live in the United States, MDT, so please be mindful of the time difference, about 12 hours. I am often available on irc in the early morning or late evening. I am available through Wikipedia email and will respond to notes on my talk page. Our experience with mentoring is that users who edit actively and communicate freely with other users often have the best experience, so, if possible, jump right in and actively edit your class assignment and anything else that interests you and feel free to ask me, or any other Wikipedia user, for help. User:Fred Bauder Talk 20:42, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
Article Review
edithi,
I went through your article, its really good as of now, you still have time to add more content though. The paraphrasing has been done quite well, which is great!!! The article covers mostly all the aspects, except if you could just add more to the criticisms part (just a suggestion). Your refernces are really good. i see that you have referred to a number of books, which is great for your article and, to get you marks :)
The arragement of graphs is nice, you have formatted the equations, thats good. What you need to do You can consider adding an infobox to your article.
Another important thing is to categorize your article, please do this asap. The picture you have put up is good but try adding some info about Oliver E. Williamson , like birth date, contibutions, nationality, etc, below the picture as apart of the infobox. Any problems let me know :) Devanshi tripathi (talk) 08:39, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Problem
edithey i guess Srinjoy is doing an article on behavioral theory, and Williamsons model will come under that right? Please co-ordinate, to avoid problems of deletion, and let me also know :) Thanks Devanshi tripathi (talk) 08:42, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
oh ok....then thts fine :)
thanks for confirming
A barnstar for you!
editThe Writer's Barnstar | |
This is for your good work on your article 'Williamson's Model of Managerial Discretion'. Keep up the work! :) Tejal Johri (talk) 17:45, 5 October 2011 (UTC) |
Thank You
editThank You Tejal Johri :-) Any suggestions?
A cupcake for you!
edithere have a cupcake, for your contribution to the article Williamson's Model of Managerial Discretion Devanshi tripathi (talk) 08:28, 6 October 2011 (UTC) |
Thank you
editThank you Devanshi tripathi. Thanks for your suggestions :-) Bluejazz6 (talk) 09:56, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Your article!
editHey Bluejazz!
I went through your article and really like it!
I liked almost everything from your article you have added many references, layout is great, sections and subsections looks cool in TOC, and Formulas and Graphs are looking pretty well!
Keep the good work, let me know if you get stuck.
Cheers,
Ram (talk • contribs) 16:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you so much
editHey,
Thank you so much Ram:-)
Now i feel like my article got noticed :p
I shall try and make improvements and additions to my article.
A kitten for you!
editHey! This is for you contributions towards your article Williamson's Model of Managerial Discretion. Keep the good work going!
Cheers,