User talk:Brian Waterbury/sandbox

Comments on Rough Draft

Brian: Very nice job. Some of you material will end up being covered in other sections, but that's fine. Actually, the abbreviation for gram is g, but there should always be a space between the value and the unit of measure. Dharmee is correct, however, that your scientific names should always be italicized. I would move the sentence on reproductive maturity further down in that paragraph so that you have a logical chronological progression. Good work! And don't forget to add citations to the text! Njclum (talk) 20:44, 11 December 2016 (UTC)