Bryceg11

This is my talk pageBryceg11 (talk) 17:32, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Brief Bio

Bryce Gawronski Geography

Photography

• Nature Photography
• Amateur Photography
• Nikon D3100

Bryceg11 (talk) 17:42, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Posing a Question

How did you all feel about the Twitter unit we just finished? If you didn't use it before, do you feel more inclined to use it now? Heathercide (talk)

Welcome!

Hello, Bryceg11, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:47, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Step One: Rhetorical Analysis

Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths

• Relatively unbiased tone
• Neutral coverage
• Credible Sources
• Understandable

Weaknesses

• Not a lot of information
• Lack of details
• Not a very professional tone
• Missing essential aspects

Question 4

1. 1 The article was started December of 2012.
2. 2 It was very bare bones in content early on.
3. 3 Material was added very slowly and not very diligently by a variety of users some of which vandalized the page while others fixed the page.
4. 4 It has taken approximately 3 and a half to 4 years for the page to get to its current state.
5. 5 There have been edits made within the last month.
6. 6 The page is still active.

Question 5

1. 1 I did not notice any conversation going on in the "Talk" tab. The only thing that I noticed in particular is that the page seems to be a part of a collaboration for the state of Indiana and the school districts. Bryceg11 (talk) 21:18, 10 February 2016 (UTC)

First Edits

The page that I edited was my old high school's page, Kankakee Valley High School. My main edits were relatively minor. I added some more details, improved the tone and information a bit as well. I did delete some previous entries in order to do this. Bryceg11 (talk) 16:03, 11 February 2016 (UTC)