User talk:Bryson jones/sandbox

Sources

I don't see your sources posted in the sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:53, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

The article that I am adding additional source information to is "Education in Norway". The link to the wikipedia article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Education_in_Norway.Bryson jones (talk) 17:22, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

These are the reference citations that I am adding to the "Education in Norway" wikipedia article:

Aamodt, Per O. "A New Deal for Norwegian Higher Education?" European Journal of Education 25.2, Recent Trends in European Higher Education (1990): 171-85. JSTOR. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

Johnson, Palmer O. "The Norwegian System of Public Secondary Education." The School Review 44.8 (1936): 608-14. JSTOR. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

Cultice, Wendell W. "The School System of Norway." The Clearing House 42.2 (1967): 119-21. JSTOR. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

Nordland, Eva. "Teacher Training for Norwegian Schools." International Review of Education / Internationale Zeitschrift Für Erziehungswissenschaft / Revue Internationale De L'Education 15.1 (1969): 65-74. JSTOR. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

The Lead

Added the wikipedia article "History of the New Orleans Pelicans" to the course homepage, claiming it as my second article selected for lead editing.Bryson jones (talk) 07:45, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

I recommend that you avoid editing medical articles until you become more experienced as an editor and get some medical expertise. The Pelicans lead looks very good, and you should go with it. Please proofread it first. There should be a single space following each comma or period. Also, there should be an apostrophe in the phrase "the Pelicans' season." Once you make these changes, you should post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:36, 1 November 2015 (UTC)