CLucy1994

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:08, 21 January 2016 (UTC)

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Feedback

Nice work on your article draft. I made a few minor edits that you can see in the article history. I have one major concern and that is the way you present the DSM 5 criteria. The DSM people are very protective of their copyrights and take issue with anything that reproduces their criteria too closely. While it's fine (and a major plus to the article) to present the information, you need to summarize it in text.

Not everything in the article is clearly connected with a source. Before merging your additions with the mainspace article, please make sure that everything you add is supported by a citation, and that everything can be tied to the appropriate source. Right now, you have some paragraphs that lack any citations, and some that lack a reference at the end. While the source might be present elsewhere in the section, there's no way for the reader to know for certain. And as the article continues to grow as others people add to it, things like that can become more problematic.

That aside, I think you have done really good work, and hope you have fun going forward. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:13, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Also pinging @Ksannch, Mbozsik, and RobDragani: on the above feedback. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:15, 10 April 2016 (UTC)