User talk:Carlyhansen/sandbox
Assignment 5 - Dr. Council's comments
editFirst of all, this is on the wrong page. It should be on your user page. J.R. Council (talk) 02:55, 26 October 2018 (UTC) Here are some things you should take care of:
- Be more specific on your to-do list.
- Regarding the outline:
- It's not really an outline. See the examples I posted in Wikipedia resources.
- Have you compared your outline with the existing Wikipedia page on hypnotherapy? How mush overlap is there? I have not looked at that page myself yet, but I imagine it is pretty well developed.
- You should have a lot more sources than you list. It's a popular topic.
J.R. Council (talk) 03:04, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
To Do List: Carlyhansen (talk) 04:58, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
1. Find/create an entire source list that is credible and relevant to our topic. CARLY
2. Continue to edit and revise our page throughout the semester. This will include fixing sections/headers, grammar problems and proof reading, and figuring out what is applicable to our final page and deleting what is not. DANE
3. Gain an incredibly vivid and in-depth understanding of our topic through research, even if we will not use the sources in our final project. CARLY, DANE
4. Create the outline. CARLY, DANE
Carlyhansen (talk) 05:12, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
OUTLINE Carlyhansen (talk) 05:12, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
Definition
Hypnotherapy has several definitions and branches to it. There are many different kinds and practices of hypnotherapy that can be applied to different aspects of life, such has health issues (physical and mental), and other outward aspects of life. This will be discussed in the branches section.
Carlyhansen (talk) 01:46, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
History
Branches of Hypnotherapy Practice
Traditional hypnotherapy
Eriksonian hypnotherapy
Health hypnotherapy ("curative")
Focused hypnotherapy
Cognitive and behavioral hypnotherapy
Uses
Medical
Mental
Cognitive and behavioral
Carlyhansen (talk) 01:46, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
Carlyhansen (talk) 07:12, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
Subheaders:
Branches of Hypnotherapy Practice
https://link.springer.com/content/pdf/10.1007%2Fs003840000248.pdf
https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.1111/j.1365-2036.2005.02697.x