User talk:ChemStudent24601/sandbox

Suggestions from ChemLibrarian

Good additions to the article. A few suggestions here.

The Infobox in the original article should be kept.

There is no need to have a heading for the Introduction section. You can just delete the heading.

I see that you kept the original sentences from the old article in parentheses. Please feel free to change them too if that makes sense.

For reference 1, you need to add a title to the webpage you cite. Preferably, you should add the access date to the website.

Could you please clarify where the image you used from? If you did not draw the diagram yourself, please do not use it for your article and delete it since you might have violated the copyright. Please let me know if you have questions.

ChemLibrarian (talk) 16:47, 20 December 2013 (UTC)