Chickenkicker96
Joined 10 July 2017
Latest comment: 7 years ago by AugusteBlanqui in topic comments on draft
Chickenkicker96, you are invited to the Teahouse!
editHi Chickenkicker96! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
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deleted sandbox?
edit@Chickenkicker96: Did you mean to delete the content from your sandbox? If it was an accident you can revert to a previous edit! AugusteBlanqui (talk) 09:32, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
comments on draft
editThis is a good draft. You've found some good sources. Suggestions:
- There is an excess of citations (every sentence); we'll discuss strategies for consolidating citations in class.
- For the lead: The siege of Kilkenny occurred in 1650 as part of Cromwellian conquest of Ireland. [then a sentence on significance, ...as a result...]
- Some copy editing to catch minor errors