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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

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Rephrasing for the first section- Some countries, such as China and South Korea, have well-established rules and procedures for international adoptions, while other countries like Saudi Arabia forbid it. Some countries(or nations however you want to phrase so you start two sentences the same way back to back), notably many of them are African, have made their residency requirements for adoptive parents stricter and more extensive. This in effect rules out most international adoptions. The whole part about interracial adoption can be removed because it is unnecessary information. The major origin and receiving countries of children section can be consolidated significantly, some of the sections are redundant or unnecessary.

The UN Declaration relating to the welfare of children section- the first sentence needs commas.

Freemjd (talk) 18:18, 29 October 2018 (UTC)