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- I'm curious to know what images your group is thinking of adding. I suggest finding an image of the production of the making of the ice cream, or even the final product in its packaging.--Aasthasuri osu (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2018 (UTC)Aasthasuri
- Make sure to use the headings tab under the dropdown menu instead of bolding the headings. --Aasthasuri osu (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2018 (UTC)Aasthasuri
- Possibly change the ingredients list to a list rather than in one line. It may be easier to the eye if you utilise a list. --Aasthasuri osu (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2018 (UTC)Aasthasuri
- Under the controversy heading you mention that the US FDA website says this... Instead, I would suggest stating what they say because the source will speak for itself, as it is already factual information. --Aasthasuri osu (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2018 (UTC)Aasthasuri