User talk:Daisygmendez/sandbox

Peer Review Comment

Firstly, I would add a title to the section or some indication as to what is being discussed. It was slightly difficult to understand what was being discussed. I noticed you said the article hadn't been updated in 3 years, however, it isn't clear what updates are being discussed. Secondly, I would also add sources within the actual section. Links to other articles would also be helpful. It does appear to be a bit wordy as well at times which makes it difficult to follow. What exhibits are you referring to in Tunisia? Besides this it was well written and uses Encyclopedic language.

Lrin96 (talk) 22:32, 20 October 2017 (UTC)