Dawood34

Peer Review

I really enjoyed the article it had some neat information on buzz population in relation to the worlds economy. I liked how you picked plants that are universally known such as the tomato. It does need some grammar check though to make it flow better. I would change “technology advancements” to technological advancements and at the end of the first paragraph you have, “at steady pace,” which I would change to at a steady pace. Also, I believe that lycopersicon esculentum should be italicized since it is a scientific name. Looks like some of your citations are missing links to them, not sure if this is a problem with Wikipedia being compatible with them or if you just haven’t added them yet. Overall, the article looks like it has made some really good progression and you did a good job at keeping a neutral tone. I would focus on making sure there is a good sense of flow in your writing, at some points it did seem choppy but this was only due to little grammatical errors.

Amperity moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Amperity, does not meet Wikipedia standards for inclusion. Specifically, there are issues woth References not being formatted correctly (use “cite” templates more), headings that should not be all caps, and many unneeded external links within the article. I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Willsome429 (say hey or see my edits!) 00:40, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Amperity

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 16:49, 3 May 2020 (UTC)