User talk:Dchokr1/sandbox
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Josefhoracek in topic The Lead
Sources
editYour sources and citations look great. Go ahead and add the citations to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:18, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
The Lead
editThe article you selected already has a lead, and while it is not perfect, your contribution would be negligible. You should choose a different article and write another draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 11:06, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
- Replace "a main source of living" with "major resource." Then post the new lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:39, 9 March 2016 (UTC)