User talk:DeanACapitano/sandbox

Hello this is Dean, I have created my own article for my Wiki project and Peer review.If there is anything you cant tell me to help and improve my article please be free to leave suggestions.Thank you and Good Wikapeding!!DeanACapitano (talk) 16:00, 1 April 2017 (UTC)

Hello Dean, this is McKenna. I have been assigned to you for our peer review. I know almost nothing about video games, but maybe that will help me stay neutral. I think you have a good start. I would just check grammar in a few spots. When you are writing the real thing, I would just go into more detail about the game. Maybe talk about who, what, where, and why of it being created. Maybe also tell how it is different or the same as other games out there. Otherwise, good start! (Mckenna720raymond (talk) 00:57, 5 April 2017 (UTC))